Showing posts with label published writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label published writing. Show all posts

Sunday, September 4, 2016

RAPUNZEL, RAPUNZEL - LET DOWN YOUR HAIR

One day a woman wanted to  have lettuce.  The husband raced to the witch's garden and the witch caught him stealing her cabbages. "... But my wfe really wants them." he said.
"You can have them only if you give me your first born child to me." said the witch.
"oh ok that's a deal." said the husband sadly.

When the woman had a child, the witch stole her.  The witch said "I will call you Rapunzel."
She got bigger and bigger.  "Rapunzel let down your golden hair." called the prince.  Her  hair flung down.  The prince climbed up the tower.

"Oh a handsome prince!"  The witch climbed up the tower and the prince was still up there.  The witch got very very angry.  She yelled  "get out!" 

The prince climbed down the tower and jumped on his horse and galloped away into the desert,

By Erica 

Wednesday, August 31, 2016

CHOCOLATE'S CHAIR

Yesterday we made chair for chocolate even though he was a bear he still wanted to sit on a chair like a Candylander.  Soon it was time to act.  Me and Monty and Kale and Reuben and Nate.  We made a hammock and Miya and Cate and Blake made an origami couch.   "Time to judge!"  the teacher said.   The winner is Miya "good game."

By Jackson

Sunday, February 21, 2016

AMAZING WRITERS

Check out these awesome stories inspired by this picture...

 

THE RUNNING RACE

"On your marks, get set ... go!"  yelled the big teacher.  Heaps of kids came with fast feet running around the concrete track ... then the kids saw a red apple house.  Mr Ant peeked out of the little window in the red apple house.

"Yikes!  Quick!  Pack up a few things and open the door and run for your life."  

The red apple house made a really big ... splash.  The ants got all splashed.  The ants went to find a new house.  They had found a new house just in time for dinner.

By Ethan



THE RUNNING RACE

"On your marks!  Get set!  Go!"  yelled the teacher.  The ginormous lot of kids ran and ran and ran as fast as their tiny legs could ever go.

But there was an apple in the way there were tiny ants in the green apple and Mr Ant peeked out of the tiny peeked out of the tiny window and he saw millions of kids running so Mr Ant yelled.

"Pack your stuff and run for you lives" and they got out and they were safe.
"That was hard work." said Mr Ant.

By Aaron




THE APPLE HOUSE

"Aaaa!" Daddy worm screamed.  There was a herd of kids racing towards his shiny red apple house.
"Run for your lives or you'll be squashed to death."

So they all packed and climbed a tree.

"We'll be safe here,"  said Mummy worm.
"...but not my apple house,"  Daddy worm cried because his apple house was being squashed.



THE RUN

On a sunny day the school went for a long run along the school field.  And when a boy came, he almost stepped on a little red apple.   He stopped right in time.  
The father ant shouted "Pack up your stuff and run for your life."  
At last they found a nice house and they were safe.

By Aeva



Thursday, February 18, 2016

THE GIRUTLE



What in the world is that!!!

It is a Girutle.
Well that is a bit strange because it is a giraffe head on a turtle body.

"Can we get one?"
"Yes we can,"
"Yay!"

By Sophie

LIZARD ON THE LOOSE


Zoom! Zoom!
Out of the room came a blue tongue lizard.
"Come back, come back!"
But ... the lizard was too far away...

Brrm, brrm.
"Pull over!" said the Police.
"Show us your Lizard Licence."

By Kalas

THE QUEEN'S DOGS


Pheeeeeew! 
The Queen came out grumpy!
"Come back here!"
Those sneaky, cheeky corgis had escaped and had a holiday in Hawaii.
"Yay, we're in Hawaii!"  
The corgis went down the steps.
Clip clop.  
Clip clop, went the dogs going down the brick steps.
They had fancy drinks in their paws.

By Ethan